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OSN STORY: Dialogue Between Two Girls Discussing A Polaroid Picture

By Hilde Kate Lysiak
December 28, 2018

Crunch Crunch

“I really am sure.”

“You’re making things up.” 

“No! I am not I saw it! I swear.”

“Well, I’m not buying it.”

Crunch Crunch

“But its true. My dog was right there in the picture. RIGHT THERE AND NOW HE IS GONE!”

“I am sure she just ran away or something when you took the picture. It is not a big deal.”

Crunch Crunch

“That doesn’t make sense. I KNOW my dog would never run away and if that was true, how do you think it’s possible that I wouldn’t notice?”

“And do you hear that? It sounds like someone is chomping down on something?”

“Hear what? No. And you have had Callie for less then a day I don’t think you know her that well.”

“Who is that then!?”

“That older lady in the back round?”

“No! The one standing next to me in the photo. The one who looks like 40-ish or something, with the rainbow scarf dark hair and giant glasses.”

“What about her?”

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“I do not remember seeing her when I took the photo. Where did she come from and why is she standing right next to me in the photo?”

“Chill. She was probably just walking bye and decided to photo bomb. And she probably scared your dog away, case closed.”

“Why would someone that old photo bomb—Callie! Stop barking!—That was like the first time I have heard her bark.”

“You are making a big deal out of nothing. He is just a dog. Can we stop talking about this now.”

“Ok, I guess so. Whatever. Maybe I’ve been sniffing glue or something. Do you want to play a board game or something, or play on the Wii?” 

“Ok I guess so. We could play on the Wii.”

“What was that!?”

“Umm… I do not know.”

“It sounded like something eating.”

“Do you think your sisters in here playing a prank on us or something?”

“She might be… but I umm I thought she was sleeping over at her friends house.”
“Wait, really?”

“I think!”

“Maybe she was lying.”

“Yeah but how would she get in my room we have been up here for hours! —Is anyone in here?”

“I hear it now!”

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“Ohhhh my gosh!”

“This… is uh, weird.”

“I-i’m getting a little creeped out.  I want to go home. Good luck with all of your crazy. I’m out of here.

Crunch Crunch Crunch Crunch

“There she is again!! OH MY GOSH SHE IS HERE FROM THE PICTURE!!!”

“I can’t hear you! That sound..it’s…”

“W-what are.. you doing here—lets run!!”

“The door… I can not open it!!”

IS IT OKAY IF I PLAY TOO?

Crunch Crunch Crunch

Burp.

2 comments on “OSN STORY: Dialogue Between Two Girls Discussing A Polaroid Picture

  1. Robert Kempka
    December 30, 2018

    Good one Hilde! Short and sweet.

    Like

  2. Celi (@wvceli)
    January 1, 2019

    I noticed more punctuation and grammatical errors than in your news stories. Did you accidently publish a rough draft? The dog is identified as “he” by the owner, then as a she in the rest of the story. Not identifying the speakers is a little confusing because the dog owner speaks a couple of times in a row, rather than continuing the back and forth pattern. I think you meant background, not back round. Please edit this and let us see it again.
    Thank you for sharing your writing with your readers!

    Like

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